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In April, when my essay - Home away from Home Cookin' - appears in Cornbread Nation 4: The Best of Southern Food Writing, it will share ink with a poem by Michael McFee that, simply put, blew my doors off. Michael is a faculty member in the creative writing program in UNC-Chapel Hill's Department of English. Cornbread Nation 4 contains three of his poems. With Michael's permission, I share one of them with you. This, my faithful readers, taught me more about salt than all 465 pages of Mark Kurlansky's Salt: A World History.

Salt ... a darn good poem by Michael McFee

It was the taste their country tongues craved,
my parents and their parents and ancient kin:
not sour, not bitter, not funky umami,
not (like us, their spoiled television kids) sweet

but salt, pepper's twin, sugar's quiet cousin
seeping from fatback into simmered green beans
or pinched into steaming dishes by the cook
or flurried hungrily from our grainy shakers.

They'd even salt fruit, fat knife-sliced wedges
of an apple or (better) a juicy watermelon
on the picnic table, that seedy red meat sweaty
with melting crystals: summer in the mouth.

I'd pick up stray grains with a licked fingertip:
Who is the Morton Salt girl? Does she own a mine?
My mother just laughed and shook her head.
Our blood must have been briny as the Dead Sea.

There are five basic tastes in the human palate;
that salty umbrella girl never really existed--
now I know. Now I watch my sodium intake
as the doctors instruct. But how I crave it.

One day, like my parents and all their parents
I'll become the salt of the earth, pale seasoning
waking the hidden flavor of the family plot
until I too lose my savor, forgotten underfoot.

Posted on Tuesday, January 15, 2008 by Registered Commenterdeb in | Comments46 Comments

Reader Comments (46)

All I can say is, when I was a little girl I used to eat salt straight from the old, cracked wooden salt grinder than my mother let me keep with my fake plastic kitchen set. Mmm...salt.

Of course, I also used to sneak into the cupboard and eat margarine out of the container. So my palate wasn't exactly discriminating.
January 17, 2008 | Unregistered CommenterMonday
monday - you fit in great around here! may i suggest that you check out the archives for a glimpse at some of our "finer" moments. look specifically for the entry titled "dirty little food secrets." oh, better just - just plug that into my nifty search function. forgot i added that.
January 17, 2008 | Unregistered Commenterdeb
Monday, I'm so glad you're here!

It's a great poem, Deb. Now I want some watermelon.
January 17, 2008 | Unregistered CommenterLuisa
Watermelon is a food I will never understand... same goes for celery and cantaloupe. It's not appetizing - I feel like I'm chewing on crunchy water.
January 17, 2008 | Unregistered Commenterliza
Well at least someone said it! I feel the same way liza. crunchy water indeed :)
January 17, 2008 | Unregistered CommenterAndrew
Hey Deb, how about that poem "Reflections on a Gift of Watermelon Pickles?"
January 17, 2008 | Unregistered CommenterBeverly
Did Martha's dog Pancho make you chicken?
January 17, 2008 | Unregistered CommenterBeverly
It had never occurred to me to put salt on watermelon until a friend made me try it when about two years ago. It's actually good. But I can't stand celery. In Girl Scouts, I used to lick the peanut butter off and leave the celery. I think it's the strings, tho, not the crunchy water. It's just...ugh.
January 17, 2008 | Unregistered CommenterMonday
And, thanks for the welcome. :) It can be a little intimidating to butt into an established group, but you folks are just fun.
January 17, 2008 | Unregistered CommenterMonday
I choose umami over salt any day. Monday, you get my vote, I don't like the celery strings either. I've got the de-stringing celery badge on my G.S. sash to prove it.
January 18, 2008 | Unregistered CommenterNot Teresa
Pancho? It's Poncho (God Rest His Tired Little Valiant Salt - oh i mean Soul) and I don't understand?

Not Teresa, the GS sash comment just blew your cover.
January 24, 2008 | Unregistered CommenterMartha
do you think Not Teresa can be seen on another site in cheerleading garb?
January 24, 2008 | Unregistered Commentermarian
can't say - on the grounds that it may get me in some sort of trouble.
January 24, 2008 | Unregistered CommenterMartha
Careful now...it's almost Girl Scout cookie time...
January 24, 2008 | Unregistered CommenterNot Teresa
martha - bev was referring to the meal i had a few nights ago. pancho's lemon lime chicken. i'm just surprised she remembered his name. she always called popcorn (martha's other dog - so that everybody's in the know) lemonade.
January 24, 2008 | Unregistered Commenterdeb
Wrong again. I called Popcorn...Lemonade because he was a yellow lab. I think he was lab. Poncho was the dog that was mistaken for a bird wasn't he?
January 25, 2008 | Unregistered CommenterBeverly
yes, poncho (god love him) was once mistaken not simply for a bird ... but an exotic bird.
January 25, 2008 | Unregistered Commenterdeb
Did someone mention Girl Scout Cookies?
January 26, 2008 | Unregistered CommenterLuisa
well now that we're onto another good subject.....let's see who like which cookie best..... me? tag-a-longs are my crack. thank god they only come around once a year. what's the fuss over thin mints? i just don't get it.
January 26, 2008 | Unregistered Commentermarian
I'm with you, Marian. Tag-a-longs.
January 26, 2008 | Unregistered Commenterviv

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